PAPER CUT at the Park Theatre
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“Excepting the performances, everything feels a bit βdebutβ, despite the creative teamβs impressive programme credits”
Kyle has spent his whole life desperate to be in the army. Idolising his father who was a soldier, heβs sacrificed the possibility of love, both romantic and familial, to ensure his military future. When he meets Chuck while serving in Afghanistan, he starts to wonder if he can have both. But after stepping on an IED, his hopes are upended.
Paper Cut by Andrew Rosendorf poses some important questions about masculinity, family loyalty, and love. The idea that gay men should have had to hide their sexual orientation in order to serve is rightly highlighted as bizarre and destructive, and the idea, too, that romantic love requires sex is called in to question.
Kyleβs relationship with his twin brother Jack is a brilliant example of unconditional love, of caring for someone even after theyβve betrayed you for their own ends. Joe Bollard as Jack is warm and awkward, laughs and tears coming as easily as each other, and heβs a brilliant counterpart to his overly intense brother.
Prince Kundai, who plays love interest Chuck, is charismatic and lovable. Entirely comfortable in his own skin, and endearingly sincere, itβs easy to see how he and Kyle might slip from friends to lovers.
Tobie Donovan, playing Harry, another love interest, is sweet and ridiculous. Heβs got great comic timing and even gets a few laughs where Iβm not sure there was supposed to be one.
While the plot itself is gritty and melancholy, the script feels a little too sentimental, relying on clichΓ©s and long…meaningful…pauses. Callum Mardy (Kyle) seems to get the bulk of these staring-off-in-the-distance speeches about the meaning of serving your country and so forth, and it overrides the genuine tragedy of his story, with him coming off a little ridiculous.
The scriptβs final lines, for example, completely diminish the fervent conversation that preceded them, as Kyle and Chuck look out at the sunset: βIf you could go back and change anything, would you?β/ βSo much.β The end. Itβs just a bit lazy. And itβs a shame because in Mardyβs moments of levity, irony and even anger, he shows his capabilities, but heβs let down by the scriptβs sap.
Sorcha Corcoranβs design, a simple wooden backwall with a row of inbuilt storage chests, works fine, serving its practical purpose of hiding props and keeping the stage clean. That is, until the penultimate scene when before, in the cover of dark, the stage is scattered with gold confetti. This all comes to make sense when the final scene takes place on the beach, but less so when weβre in Jackβs apartment. Why not just wait a minute, and scatter the confetti directly before the beach scene? Or, given how minimalist the rest of the set is, why do it at all?
Lucia Sanchez Roldanβs lighting design is inoffensive: Strip lights hang from the ceiling, changing colours throughout. It doesnβt seem to have much to do with the story though, and seems a bit βdesignyβ for the sake of it.
Excepting the performances, everything feels a bit βdebutβ, despite the creative teamβs impressive programme credits. That said, thereβs plenty to work with, and nothing a bit of red ink couldnβt fix.
Reviewed on 12th June 2023
by Miriam Sallon
Photography by Stefan Hanegraaf
Previously reviewed at this venue:
Leaves of Glass | β β β β | May 2023
The Beach House | β β β | February 2023
Winner’s Curse | β β β β | February 2023
The Elephant Song | β β β β | January 2023
Rumpelstiltskin | β β β β β | December 2022
Wickies | β β β | December 2022
Pickle | β β β | November 2022
A Single Man | β β β β | October 2022
Monster | β β β β β | August 2022
The End of the Night | β β | May 2022
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