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Be Born – 1 Star

Born

Be Born

The Space

Reviewed – 26th June 2018

“visual clumsiness only added to the overall amateur quality of the evening”

 

The Space looked interesting last night. Inviting. Scattered leaves and crisp packets were strewn across the floor; a bike lay on its side; we were clearly on the edges of an inner city playground, a place pregnant with theatrical possibility. Unfortunately, the play that unfolded over the next hour did not fulfil these promising expectations. It lacked both narrative drive and pace, and the unconvincing performances did nothing to lift it beyond the realm of the banal.

The play is a three-hander, in which we see a group of friends – Ben (David East), Shaz (Abigail Sewell) and Tyrice (Christian Graham) – spend the night drinking in a park. Ben is having trouble dealing with his current circumstances – his ex-girlfriend is pregnant and he has just lost his job – and has come home after a five year absence to seek comfort and advice from the two people closest to him.

The piece opened with the recital of six different poems, exploring childhood, love, London, connection and alienation. Poetry in performance is a tricky art to master, and the performers here met with varying degrees of success, but the energy given to Dominic Holman’s untitled lyrical meditation on childhood, and to Tina Nye’s I am London, was welcome, particularly given what was to follow. (Neither of these pieces were performed by the actors featured in the play, and the programme was unclear as to whether the poets doubled as performers in this instance).

Be Born was characterised by a lack of energy, in both the writing and the acting. Christian Graham, the playwright, who also took the role of Tyrice, is not a trained performer, and his lack of tonal variation did nothing to help his fellow actors. The dialogue never lifted from the script, and the characters stayed stuck on the page, despite the naturalism of the setting. The play contained both a serious asthma attack and an on-stage accident (complete with blood pill), but these events are no substitute for drama, of which there was none. Even the promise of an offstage birth proved to be a false alarm.

In addition, the lighting design seemed almost wilfully unhelpful. Immediately after the initial poetry recital, the audience was put into blackout, into which came the first few lines of dialogue. The lights then came up, into what looked like warm daylight, and positively blazed about a third of the way through, making nonsense of one of the characters’ observations that, ‘It’ll be getting light soon’. This visual clumsiness only added to the overall amateur quality of the evening.

The Space has long been a venue which enables and supports new writing and emerging talent – indeed there were some terrific pieces on show at the One Festival earlier in the year – and as such, is entitled to ask its audiences to come with an open mind, and a willingness to engage with writers and performers at the beginning of their artistic journey. That being said, when a full-price ticket costs £14, the audience too is entitled, to expect theatre realised at a professional level. Be Born failed to meet that standard.

 

Reviewed by Rebecca Crankshaw

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Be Born

The Space until 30th June

 

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The Sleeper | ★★★ | April 2018
Citizen | ★★★★ | April 2018

 

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Dare to Do (The Bear Maxim) -2.5 Stars

Maxim

Dare to Do (The Bear Maxim)

The Space

Reviewed – 30th May 2018

★★½

“Unfortunately the production falls short of its potential”

 

They call him ‘The Bear’. In the world of finance he is unafraid to take risks, a giant on the 65th floor where the higher the elevator takes you is a clear indicator of status, “the black boy from Tottenham who took on the city”, Bear says of himself. But when he is let go by the firm because “my face doesn’t fit” his life spirals desperately back down, and soon he is transferring the rules of the finance world to the streets of London. An acute commentary on racism within the world of finance, as well as a scathing observation of a world and a people obsessed by money, this should’ve been a topical and moving story. Unfortunately the production falls short of its potential.

Mark Norfolk’s writing moves between conversation-based realism and spoken word, but the poetry is not brought out in the characters’ delivery. The rhythm and pace required of this style of writing is lacking, and moments of humour in the script are often lost in performance. Moments of uncertainty jar the performance – hesitations as lines are nearly forgotten that affect the production’s flow for example, but this is likely to be ironed out as the run continues.

The set (Alfie Heywood) is basic but functioning, but the lighting (Chuma Emembolu) is bizarrely literal at points and a more subtle design would’ve better complimented the space. The projections on the back wall could have been used more as they work really well, but needed to be more regularly integrated into the production as a whole to create a more coherent piece. At the same time, the projections are sometimes at odds with what the actors are saying and details such as unrealistic typing mean a certain slickness is lacking from the production.

To its credit, this production is an exemplar of gender blind casting. Bear is played by Jaye Ella-Ruth who is consistently convincing, portraying cut-throat trader alongside adoring husband and father, propelled forwards by an impressive tenacity and self-belief. Greater investigation into the emotional depth of the Bear’s character would aid this portrayal. I think this comes back to a question of pace. Where the spoken word moments require a greater rhythm and drive forwards, Bear’s emotional moments require more space around them, a moment to breathe. Bear carries the play, joined by actors rotating parts – a predominantly competent and supportive cast.

This is a script filled with potential and a production that is trying to do some really interesting, but it falls unfortunately short of where it is aiming to reach.

 

Reviewed by Amelia Brown

 


Dare to Do (The Bear Maxim)

The Space until June 9th

 

Related
Previously reviewed at this venue
One Festival 2018 | ★★★ | January 2018
The Sleeper | ★★★ | April 2018
Citizen | ★★★★ | April 2018

 

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