Tag Archives: Etcetera Theatre

CHECKMATE

★★★

Etcetera Theatre

CHECKMATE

Etcetera Theatre

★★★

“fast, funny and tender”

Dealing with death is difficult. But then so is dealing with other life events; and so is figuring out friendship. Dan and Brandon are not really friends. They have different tastes, outlooks and ways of dealing with things. Dan, played by Alfie Thompson Brown, is withdrawn, superior and wants to be left alone. Brandon (Owen Welsh) is loud and out there, a Liverpool supporter who likes to talk – but Dan won’t let him.

They do, however, have one thing in common. Both have lost their fathers. And Dan’s girlfriend thinks Brandon taking Dan to a football match will help him open up and deal with his grief. It is only later on that the full football connection is revealed.

Robert Monaghan’s new work is a fast-paced, sixty minute comedy drama. It is full of laughs but then wrings out a very poignant ending. As it starts, the two male characters are uncomfortably seated together on a sofa in Dan’s flat waiting for a bad evening to end. Brandon is trying to get some rise out of Dan and failing badly. In an act of desperation (on both sides) they start a game of chess.

It was never really clear to me why the play is shaped as a game of chess, nor whether the ending was the ‘Checkmate’ of the title. This didn’t feel like a competition, much less a game of strategy – although there is some weird manipulation going on: when she appears, Alice (Lucy Eddington) is impatient with her boyfriend, but it is quickly revealed (to Brandon) that she has a secondary agenda.

Despite the somewhat clumsy device, after a slowish start this is an hour full of action and reversals. It is fast, funny and tender. Thompson Brown skilfully loosens up his character. Frozen-faced at one moment, in the next he is a drama queen rolling on the floor. Welsh plays Brandon with great charisma, a lot of arm-waving and a superb Liverpudlian accent, if not his own. Eddington as Alice shows, with great charm, how contrary a woman trying to control events can be.

Director Erin Elsmore extracts big comic moments from each scene and leads it to a satisfying close. This is a good, all-round short play, produced as part of the Camden Fringe Festival 2025 by Ramhaus Productions. It works mainly for the 25-40 age group who will recognise some of their own conflicts and anxieties in the storyline, as well as the painful journey to maturity.



CHECKMATE

Etcetera Theatre

Reviewed on 2nd September 2025

by Louise Sibley

Photography by Erin Elsmore


 

Previously reviewed at this venue:

HOSTAGE | ★★★★ | March 2024
DEAD SOULS | ★★½ | August 2023
FLAMENCO: ORIGENES | ★★★★ | August 2023

 

 

CHECKMATE

CHECKMATE

CHECKMATE

HOSTAGE

★★★★

Etcetera Theatre

HOSTAGE at the Etcetera Theatre

★★★★

“the overwhelming comedic talent exhibited makes for an enjoyable and hilarious performance”

Hostage is a show about artistic integrity. It’s about creative collaboration and the sanctity of theatre…It’s about a disgruntled playwright who breaks out of prison to threaten his former collaborators into performing the story as he sees fit. We’ve all been there. Created by Bad Clowns Comedy, Hostage is a comedy which utilises spontaneity, energy and badly choreographed sex scenes, “Two sock puppets falling out of a window”, to fill its hour with laughs.

The play uses a cold open to introduce us to Christian (Christian Dart) and John (John Bond), egotistical and hapless actors performing the “Worrisome Troubles of Timothy Potts” (no relation to yours truly). Sam (Sam Walls) escapes from prison and forces the cast and audience into adhering to his artistic vision. Between scenes from the titular Timothy Potts’ life come interactions between hostage, captors, police and ‘Bubbles’ the sound operator (Johanna Dart). The piece closes with a hearty original musical number and a somewhat abrupt finish to the chaos. Its set consists of a small table and chair as part of the ‘Timothy Potts’ biopic piece that is aptly ignored. The show includes humour about theatre making and practical effects with plenty of flour in pockets and human door handles, comparable to ‘The Play That Goes Wrong’ or ‘Noises Off.

The story includes ample references to reviewers and theatre conception, creating a self-deprecating meta relationship with the audience. When they started accusing audience of being reviewers I promptly closed my notebook. Audience participation is a major instrument as the characters call on viewers and build on their responses as part of the piece. The cast of Bad Clowns keep energy at 300% throughout, delivering well-crafted gags. Dart and Walls portray co-writers/directors settling old scores with Bond depicting everything from waiter to furniture with commendable commitment and a hilarious pay-off.

With some technical improvements, Hostage could be elevated. A clear distinction between the performance of ‘Timothy Potts’ and the unfolding hostage situation could be better conveyed with differences in execution such as sound effects being more obviously ‘bad quality’ in the Timothy Potts performance and phone calls from the police being more realistic. This is especially important as both moments are depicted with equally heightened drama and comedy. Furthermore, corpsing (breaking character by laughing) intentionally and later corpsing unintentionally can reduce the impact and rapport established with the audience. With all characters being thespians, the heightened energy levels and sincere lack of menace make the piece absurd, silly and thoroughly entertaining.

Hostage as a concept is unique and well-conceived. There are elements for improvement to establish the ‘rules’ of the meta show however the overwhelming comedic talent exhibited makes for an enjoyable and hilarious performance. Hostage is a satirical and ultimately bonkers send up of playwrights and actors. Bond delivers a quiet but scene stealing performance as a dispensable ensemble actor thrown into a real action movie. Dart exudes liveliness and luvviness as the other half of the double act. Walls is a theatrical and menacing villain who threatens the audience almost as much as the cast. Hostage is completely unserious in the best way possible.

 


HOSTAGE at the Etcetera Theatre

Reviewed on 18th March 2024

by Jessica Potts

 

 

Previously reviewed at this venue:

DEAD SOULS | ★★½ | August 2023
FLAMENCO: ORIGENES | ★★★★ | August 2023

HOSTAGE

HOSTAGE

Click here to see our Recommended Shows page