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HIT MACHINE

★★★★

Soho Theatre

HIT MACHINE

Soho Theatre

★★★★

“the writing is witty and natural, delivered with authenticity by the actors”

For a play that is not much longer than the average long playing record, playwright Jonathan Caren’s “Hit Machine” crackles with more energy and tension than any piece of vinyl could ever hope for. The scratches embedded in the narrative never halt the narrative’s momentum; instead, the slight jumps make us look at the protagonists in a different way. Caren scours the grooves of his story – set in the modern-day music industry – with a very sharp needle.

The days of 45’s and 33’s are long gone – instead we are in today’s climate of streaming and viral videos (the latter adding an integral layer to the plot). Two brothers are meeting for the first time in quite a while. Wes (Josh Radnor) is a successful music producer, who seems to have lost his mojo, living beyond his means in a nine-bedroom house somewhere in America. His younger brother, Alex (Noah Galvin) has turned up with his head full of hit-song ideas, but empty pockets. He’s not holding out a begging bowl, as Wes suspects though. Just a plea for his songs to be produced. The fact that he is forcibly discouraged by his big brother is a rich theme in itself as it dredges up past rivalries and collaborations; but the play focuses on darker and more personal issues that shape their personalities.

They share the same upbringing, but with very different reactions to it. An abusive father looms large, but the memories are refracted in blindingly opposing directions. Wes was driven towards a means to accumulate wealth to escape, Alex just needed a dream to chase. Caren doesn’t give out too many details, but we certainly feel the essence as the pair duel like manic musicians fighting for their solo. Alex is – initially at least – the more vulnerable underdog, with Galvin giving him a wonderful neediness that is never obsequious. He can certainly give as good as he gets, and Galvin’s shift from rejection to determination is matched by his seamless shifts from anguish to humour. Josh Radnor’s Wes should have the upper hand, but his character’s insecurities keep pulling him down. Radnor gives a masterful performance of a man clutching at anything that will keep him afloat. Even if it means casting off the weight of his past – which includes his brother’s reliance on fraternal support.

Caren throws a third character into the mix. The rising star, ‘Defy the Leader’, has just been signed to Wes’ record label. A cool portrayal by Khalil Madovi, he adds further fuel to the fires that burn in the hearts of the brothers. When ‘Defy’ shows interest in Alex’s tunes, much to Wes’ horror and disapproval, Madovi very cleverly and subtly shows his character’s disdain towards the elder brother’s fragile self-importance.

Throughout, the writing is witty and natural, delivered with authenticity by the actors. Daniel Bailey’s direction enhances the dynamics, throwing the light and the shade into sharp contrast. He knows when to go for the laughs, and when to switch the momentum away from the comedy. There are, indeed, some devastating moments in the dialogue, especially later when the sparks truly threaten to ignite the tinder box of emotions. A moment of physical violence unfortunately dampens the effect, and could perhaps be dispensed with. Coming to actual blows is less powerful than the language. Contrary to the popular catchphrase, words often do hurt more than sticks and stones.

For a play about the record industry, the music itself takes a bit of a back seat. Instead, though, it slots effortlessly into the dialogue; almost conversation pieces in themselves. Unresolved ideas and chords emerge like memories, or even forewarnings, until the pieces come together for a thrilling finale, performed by Madovi (who co-wrote the music with Ben Harper and CJ Harper). At least the music finds its resolution (I’m not giving any more away).

What makes a hit record, is a question that has eluded producers since the first hit parade was introduced. Similarly; what makes a hit play? Again, the answer is vague, but Caren’s “Hit Machine” is sure to rise up the charts.



HIT MACHINE

Soho Theatre

Reviewed on 14th July 2026

by Jonathan Evans

Photography by Bautista Araya


 

 

 

 

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Four Woke Baes

★★★★

Underbelly Cowgate

Four Woke Baes

Four Woke Baes

Underbelly Cowgate

Reviewed – 16th August 2019

★★★★

 

“a clever, awkward and incredibly tense comedy”

 

Four Woke Baes, written by Jonathan Caren, directed by Teddy Bergman and presented by Hidden People; the show features the true story of four men on a stag party drinking beers and barbecuing out in the woods. Everything changes, however, when an alluring female approaches their campsite.

The show builds in awkward tension and uses the breaking of this tension to create most of its comedic moments. None of the guys are particularly good at holding a conversation with Emma (Lyndsy Fonseca) not just because of her ravishingly “symmetrical features”, but because of her vastly superior intellect and ability to dissect each of the guys’ behaviour. So a large amount of this performance sits you in a pool of awkwardness, begging to be alleviated by someone. Oftentimes, Boardman (Quincy Dunn-Baker) is the person that provides this. Dunn-Baker’s performance has the audience in hysterics as his heavy-handed comments land at almost perfect moments to assuage the tension in the room. However, some of the more pure comedy for comedies sake moments aren’t as sound and serve, in the context of the quality of the performance, to feel slightly cheapening.

Consistent brilliance shines from each of the actors as they work through a well-written story to hook you in. Learning about each of the guys’ lives through Emma’s diagnosing of them helps to build a strong connection to each character. When the show reaches its precipice, a do it or don’t do it moment, you can hear a pin drop… it’s skin-crawlingly tense.

Emma’s soothingly calm yet aggressively inquisitive demeanour often has the guys on the back foot and being very defensive. Though the conversation is not often elevated into any form of argument, you can feel the unwillingness of the four men to allow themselves to be read by, or to learn from, a woman. The piece’s overall tone appears to be one of a feminist nature, and achieving this with a male-dominated cast is incredibly impressive.

Colin Grenfell’s lighting and Jeff Gardener’s sound design are a highlight of the play, being integral in creating a natural feel to the performance. Together, they ease the piece through time and slowly travel from a sunset evening into the dead of night. It is done so carefully and concisely you almost don’t notice it happening, such understated and considered tech is hard to come by.

Four Woke Baes is an exceptionally interesting piece. Knowing that the story is true, you feel as if you’re watching some of the most intimate moments of a person’s life, which is quite a unique feeling. It’s a clever, awkward and incredibly tense comedy but overarchingly is a thought provoking piece of theatre.

 

Reviewed by Craig Unadkat

 


Four Woke Baes

Underbelly Cowgate until 25th August as part of Edinburgh Festival Fringe 2019

 

 

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